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This was a good entry. I think your first paragraph was a little wordy. Anthony Jones | This was a good entry. I think your first paragraph was a little wordy. Anthony Jones | ||
This paper had decent scanability. It was somewhat difficult to read due to the appearance of some run-on's. Some ideas should have been simplified in language to clearly illustrate authors point. Some more information should have been added to further the topic a bit more. There were not many outside links, but paper was overall O.K. | |||
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