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You may want to explain what passive voice is a little clearer. I like how you stated when passive voice should be used. That topic was very helpful. You might want to open up the first paragraph in a way simialar to how you exlpained possessive tense. | You may want to explain what passive voice is a little clearer. I like how you stated when passive voice should be used. That topic was very helpful. You might want to open up the first paragraph in a way simialar to how you exlpained possessive tense. | ||
- Whitney Behel | - Whitney Behel | ||
Do something to grab the readers attention. Nothing on this paper grabed my attention while scrolling it. | |||
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