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Your entry seemed to be well thought out but it needs to be put in a different order. You start out giving example phrases as tittles then you change it up and use just plain statements. You need a consistent format for how you do your entry, over all it was easy to scan for pertinent information, but you need more than two resources. | Your entry seemed to be well thought out but it needs to be put in a different order. You start out giving example phrases as tittles then you change it up and use just plain statements. You need a consistent format for how you do your entry, over all it was easy to scan for pertinent information, but you need more than two resources. | ||
--[[User:Apitt329|Apitt329]] 13:21, 24 Mar 2005 (EST) | --[[User:Apitt329|Apitt329]] 13:21, 24 Mar 2005 (EST) | ||
Great entry. You covered a great amount of information with out confusing the reader. Anthony Jones |
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