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Helpful Information. You have a lot of information I liked how you bulleted and seperated all of your information. | Helpful Information. You have a lot of information I liked how you bulleted and seperated all of your information. | ||
-Whitney Behel | -Whitney Behel | ||
Your entry seemed to be well thought out but it needs to be put in a different order. You start out giving example phrases as tittles then you change it up and use just plain statements. You need a consistent format for how you do your entry, over all it was easy to scan for pertinent information, but you need more than two resources. | |||
--[[User:Apitt329|Apitt329]] 13:21, 24 Mar 2005 (EST) |
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