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Do something to grab the readers attention. Nothing on this paper grabed my attention while scrolling it. | Do something to grab the readers attention. Nothing on this paper grabed my attention while scrolling it. | ||
-Robert Bartosh | -Robert Bartosh | ||
The entry is kind of wordy. It needs to get to the point quicker. | |||
But over all the rest of the entry is clear and easy to use. | |||
D Davis | |||