A good way to make your writng more persuasuve is to write about something where specificly you take a position on something or some issue so that you have something that you want others to beleive and thus something to be seen as wrong. There are other methods, but this one is easier to work with. ~ M. Nowell
You should use some printed sources to make your entry more complete. --Glucas 12:37, 19 Apr 2005 (EDT)