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What is a participle?

In grammar[1],according to the Prentice-Hall Handbook for Writers, participle is a verbal used as an adjective[2]. Though a participle cannot make an assertion,it is derived from a verb and cam take an object and be modified by an adverb. As an adjective, a participle can modify a noun[3] or pronoun[4].

The present particles ends in -ing: singing, dressing,trying. The past particles ends in -d, -ed, -t, -n, -en, or changes the vowel: walked, lost, seen, rung.


What is a dangling construction?

According to Prentice-Hall Handbook for Writers,dangling construction is a clause or phrase that can either modify nothing in a sentence or seems to modify a word that is not logically related. A dangling construction it is often the result of carelessness in writing and thinking.


It is important to avoid dangling participles. Even though, a participle does not make an assertion, nonetheless does imply an actor. Failing while trying to identify this actor creates misleading; and in some cases humorous-effects.

For Example:

Dangling

Driving through the mountains, several bears were seen.

- The participle driving modifies nothing; it seems to modifies bears which is not logically related.

Revised

Driving through the mountains, we saw several bears.

- Here, driving modifies we, which is the subject of the independent clause[5].


See also

Dangling Modifier[6]

References

Leggett, Glenn, C. David Mead and William Charvat. Prentice-Hall Handbook for Writers Fourth Edition. Prentice-Hall Inc. 1965. pp.95, 96 & 467.