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But over all the rest of the entry is clear and easy to use.
But over all the rest of the entry is clear and easy to use.
D Davis
D Davis
This entry is full of information. However it does not keep my attention.  Anthony Jones

Revision as of 14:03, 24 March 2005

You may want to explain what passive voice is a little clearer. I like how you stated when passive voice should be used. That topic was very helpful. You might want to open up the first paragraph in a way simialar to how you exlpained possessive tense. - Whitney Behel

Do something to grab the readers attention. Nothing on this paper grabed my attention while scrolling it. -Robert Bartosh

The entry is kind of wordy. It needs to get to the point quicker. But over all the rest of the entry is clear and easy to use. D Davis

This entry is full of information. However it does not keep my attention. Anthony Jones