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Also, there is a dangling paragraph or so after the Works Cited. It seems to repeat the opening paragraph, so I suggest simply deleting it. If it's vital, enter it among the rest of the body. | Also, there is a dangling paragraph or so after the Works Cited. It seems to repeat the opening paragraph, so I suggest simply deleting it. If it's vital, enter it among the rest of the body. | ||
: I thought your paper was good. It was very informative. You included information on all types of sentences and provided the reader with examples and a clear understanding. God job. | |||
I think your paper is straight to the point and informative. A few errors but previous commentors addressed them already. Great Work. | |||
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Your internal links are incorrect. You should have fixed this before submitting. Watch typos: I see a couple. When you give an example, state that it is an example. You should have used more than one print source. | |||
Generally well done with good information. I would like to see more consistency with the structure, however. | |||
--[[User:Glucas|Dr. Lucas]] 13:51, 18 July 2006 (EDT) | |||
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