Talk:What is a “run-on” sentence?: Difference between revisions

no edit summary
No edit summary
No edit summary
Line 11: Line 11:


Condense information so that the reader can scan for the information that they will benifit from. Anthony Jones
Condense information so that the reader can scan for the information that they will benifit from. Anthony Jones
Paper should have been broken down further to have the important information easy to grasp immediately.  There were some grammatical errors, but paper over all had a good tone that was understandable.  It is good that there were more than three resources being used.  Entry was good it just needs to be revised for the internet a little more.
--[[User:Apitt329|Apitt329]] 13:27, 24 Mar 2005 (EST)
42

edits