Talk:What is a “run-on” sentence?: Difference between revisions

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A lot of great information. You need to break up the long paragraphs and add a table of contents. The information just needs to broke up in to sections. Bold and add bullets to information. You could add links to the page and put a works cited area for where you got the information. - Dave Burkert

The long paragraphs take away from the information. I do not know for sur, but I don't think we were supposed to use "I".-Amberly Keough

This entry has a huge opening paragraph. I don't think people would want to read it to get the imformation. D Davis

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	The long paragraphs take away from the information. I do not know for sur, but I don't think we were supposed to use "I".-Amberly Keough		The long paragraphs take away from the information. I do not know for sur, but I don't think we were supposed to use "I".-Amberly Keough

			This entry has a huge opening paragraph. I don't think people would want to read it to get the imformation. D Davis