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Good entry, lots of material.Could make it a little more brief. | Good entry, lots of material.Could make it a little more brief. | ||
-Robert Bartosh | -Robert Bartosh | ||
This was a good entry. I thought it was informative and not overly wordy. Try to be a little more clear about word choice's connection to tone.-Amberly Keough | |||
Papers was well written and easy to read. The bolded words catches the readers attention and it's easy to understand. --[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 20:00, 24 Mar 2005 (EST) |
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