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This is a good entry. It is clearly written. Anthony Jones | This is a good entry. It is clearly written. Anthony Jones | ||
The examples are helpful. need to revise. | |||
-daniel Epps | |||
Good entry, lots of material.Could make it a little more brief. | |||
-Robert Bartosh | |||
This was a good entry. I thought it was informative and not overly wordy. Try to be a little more clear about word choice's connection to tone.-Amberly Keough | |||
Papers was well written and easy to read. The bolded words catches the readers attention and it's easy to understand. --[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 20:00, 24 Mar 2005 (EST) |
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