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This entry was formatted very well. The examples were done very creativly. | This entry was formatted very well. The examples were done very creativly. | ||
This entry has some grammatical errors and missing a few commas. It was easy to understand and the bulleted lists were excellent. --[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 20:04, 24 Mar 2005 (EST) | |||
-Robert Bartosh | -Robert Bartosh | ||
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It seems the majority of your entry is a quotation. This is not research, nor does it make a very readable entry. Use your own words. Also, proofread for clarity and consistency. --[[User:Glucas|Glucas]] 11:06, 25 Apr 2005 (EDT) | |||