Talk:What is “redundancy”?: Difference between revisions

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like the format. easy to read. good job.
like the format. easy to read. good job.
This entry was formatted very well.  The examples were done very creativly.
This entry has some grammatical errors and missing a few commas. It was easy to understand and the bulleted lists were excellent. --[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 20:04, 24 Mar 2005 (EST)
-Robert Bartosh
== Where is your work? ==
It seems the majority of your entry is a quotation. This is not research, nor does it make a very readable entry. Use your own words. Also, proofread for clarity and consistency. --[[User:Glucas|Glucas]] 11:06, 25 Apr 2005 (EDT)