Good so far. Be sure you are citing all of your sources and providing a section for external links. Proofread some of your sentences for clarity. --Glucas 11:05, 20 Oct 2004 (EDT)
The examples could be a little clearer. -Amberly Keough
The entry is understandable and easy to read. There are a few errors with the bullets. D Davis
great wiki. easy to read. check for mistakes -Daniel Epps
Very helpful Lit wiki. I liked how you use a lot of bullets and headings. It made important things stand out. -Whitney Behel
This entry is organized and to the point. Anthony Jones
Page could use a bit more information. There are some errors, especially when the author was listing points. -Terence Heenan