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Your essay was informative and I enjoyed reading it but I would of liked to see more examples of the proper and improper usage of commas and semicolons. I think they would be helpful. | Your essay was informative and I enjoyed reading it but I would of liked to see more examples of the proper and improper usage of commas and semicolons. I think they would be helpful. | ||
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If you're citing online sources, why don't you link to them in the text? Remeber you italics when needed. Who is "you"? See the first sentence of your second paragraph. You used only ''one'' print source? Why? What did I tell you about using sources with no authors? Why did you do it? Your links are done incorrectly. You should proofread for spelling and typos (there are many). | |||
Fairly thorough, but I think you could have organized your entry a bit better. When giving examples, say so. | |||
--[[User:Glucas|Dr. Lucas]] 13:34, 18 July 2006 (EDT) | |||
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