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Just to get this thing going, I have created the article, developed a rudimentary layout, and added a lead written by ChatGTP. '''All of this may be kept or changed'''. I would certainly revise or rewrite the lead. Questions, ideas, discussion, and comments about the project should be posted here. I'm looking forward to seeing what you all come up with this semester. —[[User:Admin|Admin]] ([[User talk:Admin|talk]]) 09:38, 3 October 2023 (EDT) | Just to get this thing going, I have created the article, developed a rudimentary layout, and added a lead written by ChatGTP. '''All of this may be kept or changed'''. I would certainly revise or rewrite the lead. Questions, ideas, discussion, and comments about the project should be posted here. I'm looking forward to seeing what you all come up with this semester. —[[User:Admin|Admin]] ([[User talk:Admin|talk]]) 09:38, 3 October 2023 (EDT) | ||
:If no one else is going to address the lead being written by ChatGPT, I'm going to go ahead and jump in and make revisions.--[[User:Valerie Emerick|Valerie Emerick]] ([[User talk:Valerie Emerick|talk]]) 07:15, 28 November 2023 (EST) | :If no one else is going to address the lead being written by ChatGPT, I'm going to go ahead and jump in and make revisions.--[[User:Valerie Emerick|Valerie Emerick]] ([[User talk:Valerie Emerick|talk]]) 07:15, 28 November 2023 (EST) | ||
::The revised introduction looks great, Valerie! The only thing that I would suggest potentially changing is in the last sentence. I believe "our" or any first or second person pronouns is not aligned with Wikipedia's/Litwiki's neutral point of view. I could be wrong, though. Other than that, I love the new intro! --[[User:Mroma98|Mike Romano]] ([[User talk:Mroma98|talk]]) 21:07, 30 November 2023 (EST) | |||
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