There were a few spelling errors,specifically hamster and together. Another thing is the paragraph before the eight rules could be narrowed slightly. I thought this was a good entry. -Amberly Keough
I liked how you use the example to explain how to use the commas correctly. Check over your first paragraph you may want to re-word some of the sentences. Very helpful Lit wiki.
-Whitney Behel
This article was well written and informative. There seemed to be very few spelling and grammar errors. This entry could have used some more works to cite. -Terence Heenan
This was a good entry. It was full of information. I think you could condense this entry to make it more scannable. Anthony Jones