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Instead of listing 1, 2,3 just make a table of contents with a small bolded heading. If you bullet the information under those headings it will become eye friendly and catch peoples attention. Great information, but it needs to look like a web page. You could add additional links to outer web sites with similar information. - Dave Burkert | Instead of listing 1, 2,3 just make a table of contents with a small bolded heading. If you bullet the information under those headings it will become eye friendly and catch peoples attention. Great information, but it needs to look like a web page. You could add additional links to outer web sites with similar information. - Dave Burkert | ||
This paper was well written and very easy to read. It had limited scrolling so people do not mind reading all of the text without getting bored quickly. Your grammer was great but be sure to check spelling. | |||
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There were a few spelling errors,specifically hamster and together. Another thing is the paragraph before the eight rules could be narrowed slightly. I thought this was a good entry. -Amberly Keough
I liked how you use the example to explain how to use the commas correctly. Check over your first paragraph you may want to re-word some of the sentences. Very helpful Lit wiki.
-Whitney Behel
This article was well written and informative. There seemed to be very few spelling and grammar errors. This entry could have used some more works to cite. -Terence Heenan
This was a good entry. It was full of information. I think you could condense this entry to make it more scannable. Anthony Jones
This paper was very well written. It was clearly understandable, yet it could have used maybe some bold print in some areas to draw the readers attention. -Robert Bartosh
Instead of listing 1, 2,3 just make a table of contents with a small bolded heading. If you bullet the information under those headings it will become eye friendly and catch peoples attention. Great information, but it needs to look like a web page. You could add additional links to outer web sites with similar information. - Dave Burkert
This paper was well written and very easy to read. It had limited scrolling so people do not mind reading all of the text without getting bored quickly. Your grammer was great but be sure to check spelling.
--Dflowers 13:33, 24 Mar 2005 (EST)