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This paper was very well written. It was clearly understandable, yet it could have used maybe some bold print in some areas to draw the readers attention. | This paper was very well written. It was clearly understandable, yet it could have used maybe some bold print in some areas to draw the readers attention. | ||
-Robert Bartosh | -Robert Bartosh | ||
Instead of listing 1, 2,3 just make a table of contents with a small bolded heading. If you bullet the information under those headings it will become eye friendly and catch peoples attention. Great information, but it needs to look like a web page. You could add additional links to outer web sites with similar information. - Dave Burkert |
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