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This paper was very well written.  It was clearly understandable, yet it could have used maybe some bold print in some areas to draw the readers attention.
This paper was very well written.  It was clearly understandable, yet it could have used maybe some bold print in some areas to draw the readers attention.
-Robert Bartosh
-Robert Bartosh
Instead of listing 1, 2,3 just make a table of contents with a small bolded heading. If you bullet the information under those headings it will become eye friendly and catch peoples attention. Great information, but it needs to look like a web page. You could add additional links to outer web sites with similar information. - Dave Burkert

Revision as of 14:16, 24 March 2005

There were a few spelling errors,specifically hamster and together. Another thing is the paragraph before the eight rules could be narrowed slightly. I thought this was a good entry. -Amberly Keough


I liked how you use the example to explain how to use the commas correctly. Check over your first paragraph you may want to re-word some of the sentences. Very helpful Lit wiki. -Whitney Behel

This article was well written and informative. There seemed to be very few spelling and grammar errors. This entry could have used some more works to cite. -Terence Heenan

This was a good entry. It was full of information. I think you could condense this entry to make it more scannable. Anthony Jones

This paper was very well written. It was clearly understandable, yet it could have used maybe some bold print in some areas to draw the readers attention. -Robert Bartosh

Instead of listing 1, 2,3 just make a table of contents with a small bolded heading. If you bullet the information under those headings it will become eye friendly and catch peoples attention. Great information, but it needs to look like a web page. You could add additional links to outer web sites with similar information. - Dave Burkert