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This was a good entry. It was full of information. I think you could condense this entry to make it more scannable. Anthony Jones | This was a good entry. It was full of information. I think you could condense this entry to make it more scannable. Anthony Jones | ||
This paper was very well written. It was clearly understandable, yet it could have used maybe some bold print in some areas to draw the readers attention. | |||
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