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- ...tches the readers attention and it's easy to understand. --[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 20:00, 24 Mar 2005 (EST)1 KB (244 words) - 21:00, 24 March 2005
- ...ly catches the reader's attention. Check for typo errors.--[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 19:53, 24 Mar 2005 (EST)1 KB (262 words) - 11:12, 25 April 2005
- ...readers attention. You had a few machanical errors also. --[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 13:38, 24 Mar 2005 (EST)2 KB (277 words) - 14:41, 24 March 2005
- ...asy to understand and the bulleted lists were excellent. --[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 20:04, 24 Mar 2005 (EST)2 KB (281 words) - 11:06, 25 April 2005
- ...is a complement. Grammer, machanics,and styles are good.--[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 13:41, 24 Mar 2005 (EST)1 KB (236 words) - 14:41, 24 March 2005
- ...e eliminated for an easy read, it would turn out better. --[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 13:28, 24 Mar 2005 (EST)2 KB (309 words) - 14:28, 24 March 2005
- --[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 13:33, 24 Mar 2005 (EST)2 KB (338 words) - 11:08, 25 April 2005
- ...ount needs to be shorter to keep the reader's attention. --[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 19:46, 24 Mar 2005 (EST)1 KB (254 words) - 15:22, 9 November 2013