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19 October 2022
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Corrected a mistake in the incident section
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Tweaks and fixes. Noted where some citations are needed.
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12 October 2022
edit background, incident and aftermath. add citation to the information added
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In The Incident, I corrected capitalization and punctuation mistakes, and broke up a run on sentence. I added two citations, one to Background, and the other to The Aftermath. Daily News and Cornwell. I added a quote/sentences to The Aftermath to go along with my Cornwell citation. I corrected a mismatched present and past tense worded sentence in Personal Response.
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→The Incident: fixed the page number to the footnote
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→The Incident: added the page number for the footnote
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→Bibliography: Fixes.
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→The Incident: added a citation for the party building up to the stabbing
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→The Aftermath: changed a word
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Undo revision 18645 by APemb (talk)
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Changed "legs" footnote to lennon
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→Background: fixed judgmental issues 10-12
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→The Incident: fixed some small parts
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→Citations: Tweaked format.
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→Background: fixed footnotes
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→Critical Response: added information
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Fixed basic spelling and punctuation mistakes in the incident section.
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→The Aftermath: added evidence from susan's memoir
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→Bibliography: Added url.
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→Bibliography: Fixes and format tweaks.
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→Background: added a line from Mills "Mailer : a biography " from page 215
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→The Aftermath: slight rewording and correction of grammar
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→Bibliography: added url 10-12
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footnotes 11 and 2 are now properly linked to their sources.
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→Personal Response: added more information
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→Bibliography: added new books source by Hilary Mills
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