Talk:What is “wordiness”?

The word states (you spelled it "state's") is spelled incorrectly.Clarify, or try to simplify facts. -Amberly Keough

Define the first list for word choice and wordiness. The point was stated clearly through the paper. -Robert Bartosh

If you stated what wordiness and redundency are, the topic would be a lot easier to understand. Your examples were helpful. You may want to space some of the different subjects out so certain topics will stand out. -Whitney Behel

This entry is put together well. The grammer is good. The entry is staight to the point. D Davis

check wiki to revise page. ok daniel Epps

The entry could use a table of contents. You gave all the right info that you needed. If you use headings to break up your sections it will be more friendly to the scrolling eye.- Dave Burkert

Liked usage of lists in this one. There were a few errors to look over. Might go a little more in-depth. -Terence Heenan