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Good paper. It included evidence and details, as well as examples. Make sure you inform the reader where you got your info. from. | Good paper. It included evidence and details, as well as examples. Make sure you inform the reader where you got your info. from. | ||
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This page has the information ready and waiting to be plucked, and it is minimal in error. I want to first commend you on terrific work. Then I want to point out: while you denoted topic change almost perfectly; you could have brought out the "To avoid"s as minor headings, The Rules as a major heading, and capitalize "semicolons" and "commas" under "The Usage". These suggestions are more for uniformity and aesthetic value. | |||
The repetition under "To avoid unnecessary commas" could have been avoided if you put: "do not" in what should be the sub heading. Your OWL source: "Using Commas," link needs fixing as well. |
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