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Condense information so that the reader can scan for the information that they will benifit from. Anthony Jones | Condense information so that the reader can scan for the information that they will benifit from. Anthony Jones | ||
Paper should have been broken down further to have the important information easy to grasp immediately. There were some grammatical errors, but paper over all had a good tone that was understandable. It is good that there were more than three resources being used. Entry was good it just needs to be revised for the internet a little more. | |||
--[[User:Apitt329|Apitt329]] 13:27, 24 Mar 2005 (EST) | |||