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* {{cite web |last=Moore |first=M.J. |url= https://www.criminalelement.com/blood-in-the-morning-the-turbulent-relationship-of-norman-mailer-and-adele-morales/ |title= Blood in the Morning: The Turbulent Relationship of Norman Mailer and Adele Morales |date=February 21, 2020 |work=Criminal Element |access-date=2022-09-21 }} | * {{cite web |last=Moore |first=M.J. |url= https://www.criminalelement.com/blood-in-the-morning-the-turbulent-relationship-of-norman-mailer-and-adele-morales/ |title= Blood in the Morning: The Turbulent Relationship of Norman Mailer and Adele Morales |date=February 21, 2020 |work=Criminal Element |access-date=2022-09-21 }} | ||
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In The Incident, I corrected capitalization and punctuation mistakes, and broke up a run on sentence. I added two citations, one to Background, and the other to The Aftermath. Daily News and Cornwell. I added a quote/sentences to The Aftermath to go along with m Cornwell citation. I corrected a mismatched present and past tense worded sentence in Personal Response. | |||