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I think your paper is straight to the point and informative. A few errors but previous commentors addressed them already. Great Work. | I think your paper is straight to the point and informative. A few errors but previous commentors addressed them already. Great Work. | ||
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Your internal links are incorrect. You should have fixed this before submitting. Watch typos: I see a couple. When you give an example, state that it is an example. You should have used more than one print source. | |||
Generally well done with good information. I would like to see more consistency with the structure, however. | |||
--[[User:Glucas|Dr. Lucas]] 13:51, 18 July 2006 (EDT) | |||
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