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You definitely provided all the information needed to understand the proper and improper use of semicolons but your overall presentation in my opinion was boring and didn't make me want to read and finish your essay. I felt that I was just reading another boring grammar book. I also noticed that just about all your facts came from Hacker. If you change the text and make important rules, examples stand out and put some of the text into your own words you might make your paper a little more interesting to read. | You definitely provided all the information needed to understand the proper and improper use of semicolons but your overall presentation in my opinion was boring and didn't make me want to read and finish your essay. I felt that I was just reading another boring grammar book. I also noticed that just about all your facts came from Hacker. If you change the text and make important rules, examples stand out and put some of the text into your own words you might make your paper a little more interesting to read. | ||
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Links? Why all the numbers? Bullets? Are you sure you organized this entry as efficiently as you could have? Did you look at the example? When giving examples, you should say so. Do you think you have enough sources? | |||
Some good information here. However, did you try to read this entry? can you? I find it very difficult. Do you think it's helpful for someone looking for this information? | |||
--[[User:Glucas|Dr. Lucas]] 13:40, 18 July 2006 (EDT) | |||
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