Talk:What is “wordiness”?: Difference between revisions
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The entry could use a table of contents. You gave all the right info that you needed. If you use headings to break up your sections it will be more friendly to the scrolling eye.- Dave Burkert | The entry could use a table of contents. You gave all the right info that you needed. If you use headings to break up your sections it will be more friendly to the scrolling eye.- Dave Burkert | ||
Liked usage of lists in this one. There were a few errors to look over. Might go a little more in-depth. | |||
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Revision as of 13:14, 24 March 2005
The word states (you spelled it "state's") is spelled incorrectly.Clarify, or try to simplify facts. -Amberly Keough
Define the first list for word choice and wordiness. The point was stated clearly through the paper. -Robert Bartosh
If you stated what wordiness and redundency are, the topic would be a lot easier to understand. Your examples were helpful. You may want to space some of the different subjects out so certain topics will stand out. -Whitney Behel
This entry is put together well. The grammer is good. The entry is staight to the point. D Davis
check wiki to revise page. ok daniel Epps
The entry could use a table of contents. You gave all the right info that you needed. If you use headings to break up your sections it will be more friendly to the scrolling eye.- Dave Burkert
Liked usage of lists in this one. There were a few errors to look over. Might go a little more in-depth. -Terence Heenan