Talk:What is the “passive voice”?: Difference between revisions
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This entry is full of information. However it does not keep my attention. Anthony Jones | This entry is full of information. However it does not keep my attention. Anthony Jones | ||
This article needs a bit more structure to it. It just seemed too sparadic. Just bring it a bit more together. | |||
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You may want to explain what passive voice is a little clearer. I like how you stated when passive voice should be used. That topic was very helpful. You might want to open up the first paragraph in a way simialar to how you exlpained possessive tense. - Whitney Behel
Do something to grab the readers attention. Nothing on this paper grabed my attention while scrolling it. -Robert Bartosh
The entry is kind of wordy. It needs to get to the point quicker. But over all the rest of the entry is clear and easy to use. D Davis
This entry is full of information. However it does not keep my attention. Anthony Jones
This article needs a bit more structure to it. It just seemed too sparadic. Just bring it a bit more together. -Terence Heenan
+ This entry is full of information. However it does not keep my attention. Anthony Jones