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: I thought your paper was good. It was very informative. You included information on all types of sentences and provided the reader with examples and a clear understanding. God job. | : I thought your paper was good. It was very informative. You included information on all types of sentences and provided the reader with examples and a clear understanding. God job. | ||
I think your paper is straight to the point and informative. A few errors but previous commentors addressed them already. Great Work. | |||
Revision as of 23:12, 17 July 2006
Works Cited
Your works cited is incorrect. your 1st two web sources have broken links. You are missing a period between the author of said sites and the title you attribute to them. Also, quotation marks should encompass the titles. The actual meat of the page seems well structured, and hints towards great research techniques.
Also, there is a dangling paragraph or so after the Works Cited. It seems to repeat the opening paragraph, so I suggest simply deleting it. If it's vital, enter it among the rest of the body.
- I thought your paper was good. It was very informative. You included information on all types of sentences and provided the reader with examples and a clear understanding. God job.
I think your paper is straight to the point and informative. A few errors but previous commentors addressed them already. Great Work.