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This entry is very informative, but the word count needs to be cut in half to keep the readers attention. You had a few machanical errors also. --[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 13:38, 24 Mar 2005 (EST) | This entry is very informative, but the word count needs to be cut in half to keep the readers attention. You had a few machanical errors also. --[[User:Dflowers|Dflowers]] 13:38, 24 Mar 2005 (EST) | ||
The paper was well written and it had good points, but the paper should have been broken down further to have the important information easy to grasp immediately. There were some grammatical errors, For example, “ is it is” was used. Entry was good it just needs to be revised for the internet a little more. | |||
--[[User:Apitt329|Apitt329]] 13:41, 24 Mar 2005 (EST) | |||