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: I purchased most of what I needed at the store; they were out of milk. | : I purchased most of what I needed at the store; they were out of milk. | ||
A [[What are “conjunctive adverbs”?|transitional word]] might also help | A [[What are “conjunctive adverbs”?|transitional word]] might also help sentence flow and clarity (Faigley 581; Hacker 204): | ||
: I purchased most of what I needed at the store; however, they were out of milk. | : I purchased most of what I needed at the store; however, they were out of milk. | ||
=== Comma and Coordinating Conjunction === | === Comma and Coordinating Conjunction === | ||
The easiest, and frequently the best, way of correcting the run-on sentence is by using a comma and a coordinating conjuction. There are seven to choose from: for, and, nor, but, or, yet (Hacker 202). | |||
: I purchased most of what I needed at the store, but they were out of milk. | |||
=== Subordinating Clause === | === Subordinating Clause === | ||
Another option would be to subordinate one of the clauses (Hacker 205). | |||
: I purchased most of what I needed at the store, although they were out of milk. | |||
=== Sentences === | === Sentences === | ||
Simply making each independent clause a sentence also easily fixes a run-on. | |||
: I purchased most of what I needed at the store. They were out of milk. | |||
== Links == | == Links == | ||
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*Hacker, Diana. ''A Writer's Reference.'' 5th Ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2003. | *Hacker, Diana. ''A Writer's Reference.'' 5th Ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2003. | ||
*Hult, Christine A. and Thomas N. Hucklin. ''The New Century Handbook.'' 3rd Ed. New York: Longman, 2005. | *Hult, Christine A. and Thomas N. Hucklin. ''The New Century Handbook.'' 3rd Ed. New York: Longman, 2005. | ||
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Revision as of 12:22, 11 July 2006
Run-on sentences, also known as "fused sentences," contain two independent clauses incorrectly joined (Hacker 200). While a sentence fragment is an incomplete sentence, a run-on jams together two or more sentences without the correct punctuation (Faigley 579).
Run-on sentences come in two types: the comma splice and the fused sentence. When two independent clauses are connected by a comma, this run-on is called a comma splice (Hult 721).
- Comma splice: I purchased most of what I needed at the store, they were out of milk.
When there is no comma, the run-on sentence is fused (Hacker 200).
- Fused: I purchased most of what I needed at the store they were out of milk.
A run-on can be a short sentence, such as, "Nothing is on television I should turn it off." Just because a sentence is long, though, does not necessarily make it a run-on.
The Rules
To avoid a run-on sentence:
- Separate the clauses with a semicolon — or a colon or dash, when appropriate (Hacker 202).
- Insert a comma and a coordinating conjunction between the clauses (Faigley 581).
- Turn one clause into a subordinating clause (Hult 722).
- Make the clauses into seperate sentences (Hacker 202).
Usage
Semicolon
If the clauses are equally important, use a semicolon to separate them (Hult 723).
- I purchased most of what I needed at the store; they were out of milk.
A transitional word might also help sentence flow and clarity (Faigley 581; Hacker 204):
- I purchased most of what I needed at the store; however, they were out of milk.
Comma and Coordinating Conjunction
The easiest, and frequently the best, way of correcting the run-on sentence is by using a comma and a coordinating conjuction. There are seven to choose from: for, and, nor, but, or, yet (Hacker 202).
- I purchased most of what I needed at the store, but they were out of milk.
Subordinating Clause
Another option would be to subordinate one of the clauses (Hacker 205).
- I purchased most of what I needed at the store, although they were out of milk.
Sentences
Simply making each independent clause a sentence also easily fixes a run-on.
- I purchased most of what I needed at the store. They were out of milk.
Links
Works Cited
- Faigley, Lester. The Penguin Handbook. New York: Longman, 2003.
- Hacker, Diana. A Writer's Reference. 5th Ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2003.
- Hult, Christine A. and Thomas N. Hucklin. The New Century Handbook. 3rd Ed. New York: Longman, 2005.