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	The entry was very well written, but could improve on scanability.		The entry was very well written, but could improve on scanability.

			This paper needs a lot of work. There were grammer errors such as the word "changes" should have been "changed" in one of the paragraphs and "some plural" should have been "some plurals". Also be carful with the words "and" and "a" because those words were mixed up in one sentence. There were some mistyped words that were typed twice such as "that end in end". The style of the sentences needs a little work in the first paragraph. Commas were missing and dashes in the words "mother-in-law". If some of these words were eliminated for an easy read, it would turn out better. --[[User:Dflowers\|Dflowers]] 13:28, 24 Mar 2005 (EST)