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This entry is put together well.  The grammer is good.  The entry is staight to the point.  D Davis
This entry is put together well.  The grammer is good.  The entry is staight to the point.  D Davis
check wiki to revise page.  ok
daniel Epps

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The word states (you spelled it "state's") is spelled incorrectly.Clarify, or try to simplify facts. -Amberly Keough

Define the first list for word choice and wordiness. The point was stated clearly through the paper. -Robert Bartosh

If you stated what wordiness and redundency are, the topic would be a lot easier to understand. Your examples were helpful. You may want to space some of the different subjects out so certain topics will stand out. -Whitney Behel

This entry is put together well. The grammer is good. The entry is staight to the point. D Davis

check wiki to revise page. ok daniel Epps