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Revision as of 12:45, 24 March 2005
Good so far. Be sure you are citing all of your sources and providing a section for external links. Proofread some of your sentences for clarity. --Glucas 11:05, 20 Oct 2004 (EDT)
The examples could be a little clearer. -Amberly Keough
The entry is understandable and easy to read. There are a few errors with the bullets. D Davis