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:Your paper was excellent! You included lots of information ( some that I could use) and stayed on point. You went through each step and made every one of your points understandable. | :Your paper was excellent! You included lots of information ( some that I could use) and stayed on point. You went through each step and made every one of your points understandable. | ||
I liked the flow of your essasy. Your examples stood out. You definitely made me want to finish reading your paper. | |||
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Be sure to proofread. I see a couple of typos. Be sure to use wiki format when you need it; see your numbered list. Also, some of the other wiki entries in the FAQ should be linked off of your entry: this is a ''must'' for a solid wiki entry. Your parenthetical citations should be included in the sentence; i.e., they come before the periods. | |||
Generally well written: clear, with only a few of those wordy problems. I think the entry needs a bit more: I do not feel as if it's clear or focused enough. You should introduce the various sections more thoroughly, perhaps. More references also could have helped your entry. | |||
--[[User:Glucas|Dr. Lucas]] 13:22, 18 July 2006 (EDT) | |||
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